“I was very happy to have Johnnie Mazzocco read and comment on my manuscript. Johnnie was an amazingly careful and sensitive reader. Her detailed comments went to the heart of what I was trying to accomplish while also noting subtle nuances. She has provided me with many much-needed suggestions for directions that I might follow during further revisions, and she has done so in an extremely positive and thoughtful manner.
Dealing with the personal writing of others can be a rather precarious business — after all, the reader or writing coach is dealing with authors who, in sharing their private worlds, are making themselves very vulnerable. Johnnie’s expertise and tactful approach were extraordinarily refreshing and, as I have said, most beneficial.
Richard Wattenberg, writer — Portland, OR
* Enticing discounts for Alchemy of Writing members *
In this focused, one-hour session, we’ll talk through your writing goals, challenges, and stuck points.
Whether you’re starting something new or feeling unsure about your next steps in your current project, you’ll leave with clear insight, tailored guidance, and a practical plan to help you keep moving forward.
$100 for AOW members
I’ll read your early-draft novel manuscript and provide a detailed, multi-page written review that highlights what’s working, what needs attention, and clear recommendations for revision.
You’ll receive honest, encouraging feedback designed to help you move forward with clarity and confidence.
$700 for AOW members
In this 5–6 hour deep-dive session, we’ll clarify and gather the essential elements you need to start your novel with confidence and keep going.
We’ll explore character development, structure, plot, theme, and key elements of writing craft. You’ll also receive guidance for building a sustainable writing practice — one that supports your creativity and serves you for the long haul.
$800 for AOW members
I’ll read your early-version novel manuscript and provide a comprehensive, multi-page written analysis, along with in-text comments and suggestions throughout.
You’ll receive in-depth feedback on character development — especially your protagonist — as well as structure, plot, pacing, tone, thematic clarity, and overall readability. This thorough critique is designed to help you elevate your manuscript and move confidently toward revision.
$2100 – $3000 for AOW members